taking a photograph of one's work, either ongoing, or if considered finished, can do much to hilite where improvements can be achieved, or what actually
doesn't look right.
As an example, I have retrieved one of Chris Nevard's outtakes....[I
hope he doesn't mind????] posted on another thread herein.......now, I am in no way knocking the modelling of others.....but am using this as an example to work from, so I hope they don't mind or become offended.
concerning the backscene.....the painted-on buildings , fine though they are as a whole, really could do with blending in a bit more with those excellent low-reief buildings in front.
specifically, look at the backscene
windows?
The low relief buildings' windows have been done very well.....the builder getting the right idea regarding
how a glass window appears from outside?
namely,
black?
[although curtains/screens may show up].......this needed to be carried over to the backscene windows......ie black rectangles, with perhaps window bars/sashes shown up as white[ish] lines?
This alone would ensure uniformity of appearances in a confined area.
Other comments I would add.......the bus? It is VERY rare that the front, steering wheels can actually be got into the
straight ahead position.....a little judicious bending of axle/wheels [try to keep steering angles uniform....don't want the bus to appear undriveable?].....gives a better impression of the vehicle actually being
driven..instead of plonked there?
same comment concerning the Riley[?] behind?
Tiny flats filed on the bottoms of the vehicle tyres give the impression of weight, and rubber tyres? The tyre colouring is about right though.....
details I would add?
the traffic island with the tall light.....the
keep left sign has been placed, showing effort.
However, the actual kerb is unmarked....in this era I recall kerb stones being painted black and white.....noticeable even when dirty?
I would question the presence of those telegraph poles?
[creosoted timber planted close to where people walk by??]
Another observation I note....the vehicles, and people seem to be
frozen in action?
Yet the trains will
not be so?
In this respect, I don't feel the scenic details compliment the trains.
A solution to this problem is, simply to
avoid frozen life.......and aim for
still life instead?
ie, position vehicles, and people in poses which do not
imply frozen action........but do imply
they're likley to be there some time?
vehicles actually in
parked poses, for example?
People simply sitting around, or in repose...or better still,
largely absent from the scene......??
capturing a
moment in time is all well and good........but must include all other aspects, including the trains...which rather defeats the original object?
short of continually moving and removing vehicles and people, I feel it is better to leave out things, so the scenic details compliment the railway as a moving entity?
in other words,
less is more?
I can take the brickbats,no fears...